3 October 2011,
I and my fellow comrades to continue watching a movie in the language lab, but before watching the movie, me and my friends saw the appearance of agyt, wibby and gestari ..
they'll tell you something they like, turned out to agyt tells a very valuable one in his life ishis father ..
wibby tells about his hobby is playing basketball
gestari menceritak about the cartoon "Toy Story"
after their appearance, we just went on rio movie
This movie is very funny, and made us laugh a wide ..
when the movie was over we had come back to class
I and my fellow comrades to continue watching a movie in the language lab, but before watching the movie, me and my friends saw the appearance of agyt, wibby and gestari ..
they'll tell you something they like, turned out to agyt tells a very valuable one in his life ishis father ..
wibby tells about his hobby is playing basketball
gestari menceritak about the cartoon "Toy Story"
after their appearance, we just went on rio movie
This movie is very funny, and made us laugh a wide ..
when the movie was over we had come back to class
Why don't you use past tense in your text. It will ne better.
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